Bill The Blacksmith - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
Knowing these type of stories you can only imagine what happened to that girl in order for her to turn into w retard like that.😂
Mc is like “HERO you smash my crush all you want as long as I can see her”loser final boss.😂😂
Well last page looks cool …
He’s too naive and the pacing’s weird. Hopefully it starts to smooth out as it goes on…
damn talk about a first chapter
It’s all the villain’s fault, but you were too foolish to help the villain.
You knew something was wrong, but you ignored it. This is your own doing, you deserve this misfortune.
I was expecting 2 sarcofices
Aw nah they got his crush lobotomized and only living family remember dead
beta boi
This is peak mental
Damn what a way to start 💀

































The author in the first chapter is trying to make the mc as much of a pushover and weak minded as possible. Also trying to imitate griffith or some other villain in tgis story. Certainly not for me.