Cheating Men Must Die - Chapter 3
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Murimhater
1 year ago
I bet it is based on a novel. It clearly leaves out steps, that otherwise would explain things. And the translation is bad, too.
WTF does heatstroke in this context mean?
And the writing is bad. Need a mcdoohickey? Pull it right out of your bum! But it’s ok, after all the author has written it into the story that the MC has the ability to pull convenient mcdoohickies right out of her bum, whenever convenient. And even a convenient plausible denialbility for when she can’t.
No, no, no, nope. Utter trash tier. Why this hasn’t died before it reached 10 chapters is bejond me. I’m out.
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onigashimas
3 years ago
I hope he’ll raise him to be cruel but just
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I bet it is based on a novel. It clearly leaves out steps, that otherwise would explain things. And the translation is bad, too.
WTF does heatstroke in this context mean?
And the writing is bad. Need a mcdoohickey? Pull it right out of your bum! But it’s ok, after all the author has written it into the story that the MC has the ability to pull convenient mcdoohickies right out of her bum, whenever convenient (alleged previous missions). And even a convenient plausible denialbility for when she can’t (lottery system).
No, no, no, nope. Utter trâsh tier. Why this hasn’t died before it reached 10 chapters is bejond me.
I’m out.