Dark Fantasy Paladin - Chapter 15
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Dragon Clan
1 year ago
It’s called Dark Fantasy Paladin, and he said the game was difficult, but so far everything has been easy for the main character. This is what I mean by the pacing being awful in this. Let me give an example, in the earlier chapters, the 1st meeting with Uriel, he told her that there’d be an attempted assassination or kidnapping by people masquerading as Church Members, why didn’t they show that? It’s just been resolved off screen when it’s very important to the story. This needs to be remade, or if there’s anyone writing a similar story, take lesson’s from my criticism.
2 years ago
The greatest swordsman of the Grand Line!
Trolls
2 years ago
Mama mia 😱
Dream chasers
2 years ago
Uh-oh… 😳
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Mihawk is also crossing universe now in search of worthy opponent or Zoro maybe.