Even if you can escape with reincarnation, my brother? - Chapter 4.2
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W7Admin🐢🐹🐶🧓
3 years ago
I’m gonna be haunted for at least a couple of years
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Dream chasers
PogFish
3 years ago
Ah hell naw
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The author’s inability to write the protagonist consistently is amusing. Imagine writing a victimized, bullied, cornered person trying to grow and overcome his trauma of being tortured, violated, mentally dismantled… This is not that well written story, of course. The author wants to have his cake and eat it. His main character is both a jaded determinator and a laidback normie. He has no issues with women completely dominating him as well, as seen by this knife-eared stranger manhandling, insulting and threatening him. He just blushes like a schoolboy.
What a weak writing.