Doom Summoner - Chapter 1
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Cultivation Clan
3 years ago
lowkey wierd charac. dev. but I like it
Light of Hope
3 years ago
This is just ‘Evolution Frenzy’ but without the sister.
Unholy clan
3 years ago
1 When did he prepare those weapons
2: If zombies are weaker than humans how did it just blow that door down like it was nothing
3: How does he know where all the cores in these zombies are
4: This is fast pace as shxt
Not much hope for this one, arts nice though it’s really a waste
3 years ago
It would’ve been nice to get some context
3 years ago
Okay, so, I usually don’t complain about something being fast pacing, but this is just ridiculous. Main character dies, regresses, prepares himself and starts to kill zombies all in one chapter
Unholy clan
3 years ago
he got bit by zombie dog; series over.
Unholy clan
3 years ago
ikr also this pacing is fast but this story has a decent plot so far
3 years ago
love being first 
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I can see why the main criticism about this is that it’s too fast. Dude out of nowhere gets a backpack, knives and a neon colored jacket? Also, where’s his Parents? Does he have no friends or relatives?