Ha Buk Paeng’s youngest son - Chapter 16
Comments for chapter "Chapter 16"
I’m liking this story.
What would make it better is a bit more gore.
Not like gits spilling out, but like at least some broken bones or something.
Humans are very fragile so with the martial arts he’s using and the difference in power he should be able to pierce them or something.
Idk what do yoou think ?
you will learn the notion of fear upon death
…I feel like it would be make more sense to call them bandits and not a sect or a evil sect. Just something to distinguish them from normal sects.
Things I learned today:
-Receiving wisdom from Buddhist monks leads one to enact scenes of violence with great joy
-The best time to stop and negotiate business deals is on a deathbed
-Flowers don’t wilt if stuck in a small wooden box
Mc really be wiping out sects
some great action and good alliances




































LEEEEET’S GOOOOO