Hiding a Logistics Center in The Apocalypse - Chapter 26
Comments for chapter "Chapter 26"
I thought this chapter was really weak. This author has some qualities, but he doesn’t know how to create emotions for the reader. I felt more emotions when MC got Lancelot (excitement) than when he found any member of his family (no emotion). This is a big issue.
Also, the trope of having a bunch of people in his space doesn’t work. It’s as if any character in his space cease to exist.
Take his fighter sister for instance. She is a woman of action, always eager to fight. And we are supposed to believe that she is just staying within his space doing nothing? Given her character, she would beat MC up and take one of those motorcycles to go with MC for the attack they are preparing to do.
I’m getting ready to drop this.
I started wondering why this story felt so good, and I realized, there’s no harem or annoying love interest.
What a Lovely Day!
The reunion was kinda underwhelming. They could have done more with this part.
W Father
Skeleton riding motorcycle will never be not hard
Argh i wish I had a father like that ….
My father went to buy milk by the way 😂
Hm… [EXPLOSION], you say?
Bedivere seems to be getting promoted into a full-fledged mobile artillery cannon
Ah one of rare moments i enjoyed side story, it was short, but really enjoyable.
The Skeleton Knights are on the march! 👹
quest 1: family complete, time to wreck havoc!
the ugly crying got me too and …well for some reason my eyes got teary too… maybe someone is cutting onions near me.
A commander willing to do the paperwork and infers intent from actions.
Pretty good considering the average commander depicted in these stories.