I am the C.E.O: Conjured Eternal Overlord - Chapter 21
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Demonflame
2 years ago
I agree with other comment, author should consider loses and character development over flashback power ups that seem completely random, also story feels very hectic while still being quite dull in art and background, like give us a moment to get to know the chars, anyways was really curious what everyone else thought about this series, as it contains a topic that is hard to be transformed into a decent story imo, so should probably cut some slack
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Cdm
2 years ago
why does she go Mary sue. She could have lost and developed her powers. Then wouldn’t meant so much more when she beats the vampire in the future. Another one bites the dust
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She loses all of her power when she uses that lil rage moment ☠️ stop being mad annoying and criticizing the story and that’s not constructive criticism it’s just rude tbh