I Log In Alone - Chapter 12

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loucs

2 years ago

It’s seems kinda good but the long explanations and dialogs before the action are somehow taking a lot more place than action itself. It’s great to have details but you need some balance. some explanations can be given during the action, when needed, like in most others manhuas. The long discussions with their thoughts are getting close to spoiling the fun out of the story. hoping it gets a little more straightforward in the next chapters… makes me kinda miss solo mc’s who discover things as they come, that girl explaining every little bits will get annoying if she continues to act as wikipedia…