I Robbed the Storehouse of the God - Chapter 3
Comments for chapter "Chapter 3"
It’s bland really the concept is not bad but not revolutionary, and that’s not a flow in and out of itself. However, the plots are added on one another without much consistency. To visualize it, it’s an addition of “and then” than a chain of “—so—“. Adding trop to trop.
Yeah I think the reason the God didn’t mind is that he knows the only way he could get the hourglass and have his authority is to beat him so he let him out of curiosity to how he went far
She’s 3rd? I prefer the guy
Lmao could it be??? The whirlwind GODDESS OF BEFORE MY REGRESSION??
How’d the girl get 3rd place If she only had 40? Oh well, I’ll let it slide.
Hmm.. It’s a bit bland
Mc is cooking but he doesn’t need the help of a woman to do that…
Man the start was cool but now it hasnt even started and he feels too op its not fun. Like he already has TURNED BACK TIME, you give him all the op items too AIGHT but now he can devour ennemy with gluttony, it doesnt even feel like he is challenged.
Hah.. Please don’t go the common trope of letting her join you in the hunt, meeting her outside the tower and eventually one of you falling in love. Or just please don’t party up with anyone and go a more unique route where you have a ONS and scadadle
“Could it be that because I killed more than half the monsters, there were no casualties?” Gee, let me ask captain obvious what he thinks the answer is 🙄