Imaginator - Chapter 27
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An issue that’s came up several times now is that the story itself is a bit unsure of what it’s trying to do with its characters. We’ve had several interactions that were just a waste of space filler where the story tries to add some comedic padding but it isn’t interesting, and conversations that really don’t need to be there but just make the short chapters seem not as short by adding dull and forgettable conversation that does nothing to develop or make characters more likable. At this point we barely know the name and a very faint outline of character’s personalities that really just fit into archetypes with the few qualities they’ve given