Immortal Me and Eldritch Wife - Chapter 17
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Honestly, to make a billion year old eldritch entity (and Lilith who is the queen of succubi) behave like a secksually unenducated Japanese Manga teenager is kind of disappointing. Don’t get me wrong, the art is great and all. But playing wife and husband like little kids on a playground is unsatisfying. Maybe I’m just too old and read too many stories with this kind of trope. I hope there is good reason for this behavior to move the story, therefore I continue for a while longer but if no real change is coming, I think I will drop it.