King of the Labyrinth - Chapter 20
Comments for chapter "Chapter 20"
I loved this manga. I think the ending is horrible. The author should have ended it one way or another, but not like that.
Or this ending could have been acceptable if he didn’t make the knight have some sort of bullshit heart attack.
Without the heat attack, and the rest of the ending the same, i could have been excited, thinking “yeah, it’s happening”, even if I didn’t see the fight.
With this bullshit heart attack, it’s a break in the narrative development. It was supposed to be that young knight against the minotaur. That was the promise from the author. Now what? If the knight died, that made no sense narratively, and it’s a betrayal of the reader.
If the knight survived, then why have him get a heart attack in the first place?
HWAT?! ITS ENDING??!! NOOOO!!!
Well i’m disappointed, I envisionned something epic following the backstab of panzel but here it ends. The rest was so good so I can just hope there will be another one like that
We should have gotten a conclusion, cause what was this ending? the one guy strong enough to win against the king dies of heart attack, and then the stronger king suddenly meets a version of him or the son, without even showing the fight result?
W manga
No it can’t be the end 😭 😭 😭
a heart attack when hes 30ish and in top shape?
atleast it looks like his son went to die for his promise
The End, the concept was fresh but too much for the author. The story could have gone two ways, either the monsters turns humans and the story becomes an action adventure or the monsters stays the same. The keeping the monster in the labyrinth is the interesting but much difficult path to take creatively.
Last chapter was 2 months btw..


































I declare this a successful short story, the plot was carried out, and the ending was designed to ensure that the readers would not be disappointed when their champion lost, although they did kind of mess that up by making the minotaur lose in the first place, I think it was very interesting.
I hope the writer makes a new, much longer one, I find short stories to be fairly distasteful.