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Arghful
7 months ago
he is a 15 year old boy 😀
I dont know what you all want form him, he learns to fight and pays a horrible price everytime he dies. Why should he know to command when he even cant fight properly? He cant even gauge the situation in any way or form.
Sorry that your all your mighty power dreams dont come true here, but i enjoy the growing of him. And as a former Drill Instructor i can see where this is going. And i will enjoy this.
newuser83
1 year ago
Gave it 10 chaps because some comments were saying its good, but… yeah idk, MC has literally 0 likeable things going for him. I’d rather be reading a story from the POV of one of the NPCs. Theres just 0 consistency to the storytelling, its just unexplained asspulls non stop, whether its to make the MC survive, or to die. All the important bits are skipped, and MC keeps contradicting himself. He says they’re NPCs, and then he questions why they are protecting him, and if they think he will do them any favors, as if they are actual people… Whats screaming they’re NPCs non stop over 80 lives going to do? Does he expect them to suddenly acknowledge they are NPCs? Then what? None of the MC’s thoughts are explained, its just a powerpoint slide of dialogue. Author really writing this story with only one brain cell committed.
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Stillmst
1 year ago
mhmmmmmm hes a general but not giving any commands ., then he wonders why hes the last one left
he is a 15 year old boy 😀
I dont know what you all want form him, he learns to fight and pays a horrible price everytime he dies. Why should he know to command when he even cant fight properly? He cant even gauge the situation in any way or form.
Sorry that your all your mighty power dreams dont come true here, but i enjoy the growing of him. And as a former Drill Instructor i can see where this is going. And i will enjoy this.
Gave it 10 chaps because some comments were saying its good, but… yeah idk, MC has literally 0 likeable things going for him. I’d rather be reading a story from the POV of one of the NPCs. Theres just 0 consistency to the storytelling, its just unexplained asspulls non stop, whether its to make the MC survive, or to die. All the important bits are skipped, and MC keeps contradicting himself. He says they’re NPCs, and then he questions why they are protecting him, and if they think he will do them any favors, as if they are actual people… Whats screaming they’re NPCs non stop over 80 lives going to do? Does he expect them to suddenly acknowledge they are NPCs? Then what? None of the MC’s thoughts are explained, its just a powerpoint slide of dialogue. Author really writing this story with only one brain cell committed.
mhmmmmmm hes a general but not giving any commands ., then he wonders why hes the last one left