Laws of the Good Child - Chapter 9

Personally, the art is good. The problem is that this manwa is too ‘cringy’ and cliche, the characters are not well rounded and the plot is meaningless. They should stop making the story revolve around the MC, but instead revolve the story around the plot from the MC’s point of view. This will show the MC’s motivation and goal without them just roaming around doing uncharacteristic things for no reason. They should also include obvious character weaknesses if their trying to make him go back to the dead mansion by force. Also, give the character a better reason to not fight dead mansion head on besides the 3 rules because he should’ve grown out of that.

Now, I am not finish and let’s talk about rachel and how dead mansion makes no sense. So, Rachel, at first I thought she would be an elegent lady whos worked in the mansion for years and mostly takes care of the children and occasionaly helps in the fighting stuff. But no, she just straight up goes there and fails misserbly. This made me confused because shouldn’t there be skilled kids who specialize in that kind of stuff and they have so much money, so what are they thinking? But anyway, that’s is when we are intruduced to another useless character which is the kid, the only thing he did was show a little of the cruelness of the mansion( Which as if wasnt obvious enough) and not affected the plot at all  . This shows how easy it is to exploit the dead mansions with no issues. The old guy did not even know about mary’s plan which wasn’t even clever because how did the MC fall for that when he seemed to be soo intellagent??? Well, I should stop yapping and I guess everyone gets it. (Disclaimer: If you can argue back or have further read the manwa and can prove me wrong then feel free to argue because I can’t)