Level 1 Player - Chapter 21
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“You have not unlocked this xharacter yet”
Ok so that guy has dementia right? Coz i m sure he said magic spells being used in that fight.
i saw sasuke … i think im too tired
It shouldn’t be too hard to work out as every other person who came across the three headed beastie ended up as a kit of parts. He told her what it was… and that it went ‘Thataway’… Kinda narrows it down to him…
WHO ELSE HERE IS GOING TO DROP THIS MAGNA OR MANHUA IF SOMEONE OTHER THAN MC (WHO DID THE WORK) GETS CREDIT FOR KILLING BIG DODGE
Her brain must be overheating rn
The translator either uses google translate, doesn’t speak English, or doesn’t give a fork.
In many parts you only get the meaning in context (if you rewrite it in your head)
Strange, only MC normal, all other players in burqua?
Damn ISIS they infiltrate everywhere :-))
interesting…
where you at penguin?
Quite the fun read
Wait where’s Penguin

































Now if only there was an ounce of blood on the ground or walls, so we could draw the conclusion that it bled a lot instead of needing to be told that. Show, don’t tell! This lazy art direction is going to turn people off of your series! If you can’t even be bothered to add a little bit of blood for a few panels to set the scene, what else will you skimp on?