Limitless Abyss - Chapter 3

so far, the art style is ok.. they make people look weird or too idle. sometimes even awkward, for example when the girl asked why they threw him. she didnt look right, even if she was shocked. and even at that the surroundings probably would have shifted to emphasize that emotion. as for the tragic backstory about his “defect” i think its pretty weak. the art made the character look pretty stupid when he was eating. also it does no explaining as to how that really effected him.. are we supposed to fill in the blanks? the only thing i can come up with is that the motherfucker ate the girls pet or was just plain embarrassing her. idk what would make that tragic. the condition is sad and all and sounds annoying. also if it was a problem wouldn’t the fucker be obese or something? so basically the art is wellmade but is mission proper body language, and the story sounds pretty crappy so far. it fails to pull empathy and kind of makes me scoff at it. (and no im not mocking the condition im mocking the portrayal and the attempt to make a backstory with it)