Little Girl, Shovel, and Evil Eye - Chapter 1
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13 comments
4 months ago
I like how they convey his emotions and feelings as he goes through these experiences. It’s kind of natural.
4 months ago
Better than most isekai out there… it seems
1 year ago
Strong start! Compelling, concise, not too familiar
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ok so far so good just don’t go into full goober slop mode pls