My Dad Is Too Strong - Chapter 24

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mfarhan222

8 months ago

looking at this now, after being familiar with better fight sequence, it really shows how lacking author’s work quality at that time.
even if we ignore the missed detail like the archer shooting but the string was not pulled, or the forceful lame excuse to make her have ‘breakthrough’ moment with all that ‘i need to protect mr manager’.although she was supposed to know she is weak.

even ignoring all those illogical things, the most ridiculous is the part where she can deal surprise blow saying ‘now’s my chance’ and have plenty of time to build momentum and chose where to strike, and yet she strike at the arm???
not the elbow joint, wrist, or shoulder, but at the body part with plenty of muscle, flesh, and strong bones. that’s like the most useless place to attack.

even for a sudden strike while avoiding etc, she could aim for the calf, torso, etc. but when she had the chance she aim for the arm? how lame was that? with such opportunity, she should strike one of the head, or maybe the knee to disarm the enemy mobility. but an upper arm?