My Eternal Reign - Chapter 12
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Cosmic clan
Dream chasers
The demon of heavenly souls
2 years ago
new gf for mc?
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……this is terrible…..like 2/10 and that’s only because the first few chapters were barely ok and daring to go the card route is brave, but the pacing is 1/10, world building 2/10, continuity 0/10 maybe even minus, character development 1/10 after twelve chapters i don’t know a single thing about MC other that the cliche i was weak and now I’m strong BS, they also just threw the summary out the window. Now the girl who was super jaded and cold instantly wants to polish MC’s knob. If i had to sum it up “this story is quickly going nowhere”