Nano Machine - Chapter 20
Comments for chapter "Chapter 20"
please dont do no redemption arc bs and just end this stuff and move on author
noo whyḍīḍīḥāḍtakopi original sin flashbacks
bro said f*** it,let’s run these hands
How lame this guy trys to kill him multiple times and gets off with just a few slaps. At least smash his core cut his ligaments. Then ring his mother’s neck like a chicken.
It is a succession war baby
I don’t care about ur past
Nano machines when acupuncture is sensed = ‘instant defensive reaction’ nano machines when the host is actively being attack = ‘ i guess ill let him get hit for a bit before i go into defense mode’
I don’t care about you nigga’s past. If you’re trash, then you’re trash. Then that’s it, especially if you’re planning to kill your sibling💀💀
oh shit he turned into muhammad ali
dude had a trash past but still no excuse for trying to murder your sibling
the chapters name is perfect
Hes literally op
Damn girl, get those mitts over here and choke me too💀
Ngl I want his mom
Now we all feel sorry for you. No the hell we don’t your mama was just a psycho bad luck nothing you or him can do about it his mama is dead from a jealous b**** yeah man I got all those damn kids she’s a grown ass up she knew what she was getting into psycho b****


































I don’t like that his tech is too overpowered. He is relying way too much with his plot device. I’m not sure if he fits the protagonist role yet.