Parallel Paradise - Chapter 17 Gloomy Lumi
Comments for chapter "Chapter 17 Gloomy Lumi"
There are So SOOO many jokes I wanna make about all this, especially from a female perspective, but…this devious author has set it up that most of my snark has been taken right out of them…
well player, writer boy… *glares*
(it IS still silly funny though)
Male Supremacy propaganda
bro is a walking sex hazard
It is good read
I’m more interested in how story develops.
“Im the meat that was born to mate ….”?????? WTF ?? WTF WTF?
I’m out… I really tried to give it a chance, since it had many chapters and also not so bad rating, so may be the story was good.
But that’s too much. The Author is some perverted son of B*****.
As a dude, I have to say, I feel disgusted, by the author for having such a f*cked up view on women and at may self for reading this crap.
I will definitely go out tonight, so I don’t feel so pathetic anymore. I will apologize to the girls that so f*cked up creatures that that dare to call them self men exist.
Its not as bad if you dont read it.





































I lost approximately 5901 brain cells by reading this