Ranker Who Lives A Second Time - Chapter 14
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Zotton
1 year ago
Okay, so two things.
- The MC, and a bit of everyone else, feels too robotic or dull. Not sure if its because it’s the translation, the mask, or what, but he feels kinda boring.
- I wish that they would stop trying to force the MC to sound smart or clever. Like, for example, he has unecessary comments that are just cringe, like “Oh, their teammwork suggests that they’ve been working together for 5 years,” like what?
I’ve read this in the past, but I don’t remember it being nearly as bad as it is now. Maybe I’m just overthinking it? I don’t know.
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The Blind Prophet 🔮
1 year ago
Ah yes human bait
What a classic
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Planet!
1 year ago
huh why are the comments so old
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Puaelto
1 year ago
The red haired dude kinda fine ngl
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