Ranker Who Lives A Second Time - Chapter 41
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Demon Hunters
The Constellation of Infinite Imagination
11 months ago
Gaahh!! Is it a quirk of Asian fiction or is it just sloppy storytelling? Stop it with all the “they,” “them,” etc., and just name it, they, or them! We don’t know anything about them anyway. Just name the pieces of your plot. Even the MacGuffin has at least one name or abstruse reference to it without resorting to this foreshadowing with a billboard stuck in it to “foreshadow” things.
Foreshadowing is supposed to be subtle, not a sledgehammer to the head.
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Fehiy
1 year ago
Aaaaah it’s so good to see how a fuсking trаsh is getting humbled and all
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Demon Hunters
unwanted guest
2 years ago
die
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Dragon Clan
DragoNote
3 years ago
the guys with Da teeth man …..completely massacred
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Dragon Clan
Dragon God
4 years ago
They deserve worse!
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time to rip and tear