Rebirth of a Hated Prince With Many Execution Flags - Chapter 5
Comments for chapter "Chapter 5"
honestly I’m reading it perfectly fine, there arent any plot holes, everything is pretty decently explained without any baki explanations. The story is kind of speedy because once main dialogue cuts there arent any side conversations because the story is focused around a more cause and effect, focusing on the main events.
The pacing and story development don’t really work. The dialouge between characters is all over the place and does not progress naturally. They also leave unresolved issues with no explanation. Did the tutor get fired? What happened with that?
Tbh it’s all too chaotic, and treason seems to be used for slapstick comedy.
It’s not a situation that can be resolved through the story narrative. It’ll work out for no reason but everything is just a mess.
I think Morgan Le Fay really was Arthur’s oneesan
And yes they did have a thing for each other at times (when they weren’t sworn enemies)