Reincarnated With a Metal Bat ~Surviving the Monochrome Madness~ - Chapter 1
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Light of Hope
SilverKing
2 years ago
sounds like the hunger games
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furryguild
2 years ago
Dropped it before it was started.
only thing MC has is the good/evil angle
really bad start to opening.
Save the prolog for chapter 0
Never start on sudo-cliffhanger.
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Inquisitive Colin
3 years ago
Not a great opener. You have to define your mc more; powers and moral standings (=good/evil) and the direction of the story to get people hooked that’s why new manwhas usually start off with around 6 chapters.
hopefully they follow this up with a few more chapters quickly before getting in the one-per-week pace
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The Jeezus
3 years ago
Short but ok. The MC seeks justice. I like it.
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Jaspier57
3 years ago
everything before the white hair MC was just the intro to the series artstyle
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loner clan
Versi
3 years ago
Kinda makes no sense so far…
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meh not bad…. definetly need more chapters before [posting one}