Reincarnation into the Barrier Master - Chapter 14
Comments for chapter "Chapter 14"
i think the author wrote this based on his/her mood.
I am really trying but I cant care for these characters man 😭 the tragedy part and revenge part was so fast we didnt feel anything about it
Think I’m going to drop this here. I’ll admit it’s an interesting story concept, but the story looks to be hardcore nothing but tragedy to the bitter end. That would be fine if it all ended after the destruction of the castle and the deaths of all MCs friends and family, but instead the story drags on, introducing more and more characters, all of whom will meet a tragic end. There’s no hope, and thus nothing to really care about.
How is he able to do all thoses jobs with just himself? travel time is a thing, must have some amazing orgazing skills.
This story suffers from pacing. it’s too quick in some parts and too slow in others. Did Gon’s magic suck away MC’s grief? DUNNO!. Is MC a sociopath? DUNNO!
It could use some work. Maybe MC should be drinking his pain away? Maybe MC gets a barrier contract with the red light district?
It could use some work. it’s not horrible, but it’s not living up to it’s potential.
ya go from being interested in the story, to sayin “dammn, here we go again, another poor chapter plot “