Return of the Legendary Spear Knight - Chapter 16
Comments for chapter "Chapter 16"
Lastly….a’black’ ogre should have sth to justify its difference to normal orges, coz these orges have no diff from ordinary ones…..red eyes….It obviously can’t have white eyes so red should be common for them then…
….Again, this doesn’t make sense that all those random knights we just saw have been pouring out ‘mana’ to fill out spheres around them. (Not even aura)enough to fill 10 swords……All those knights were using said mana….Aren’t they also capable of using magic then….And it’s said most cadets can train and use mana…..WHAT? That is some lazy ass writing….Then everyone can be a magician with training, so why are they rare?…..I give up here..
I wonder where the thrill of an OP young MC went, I feel like it lacking with the textbook reactions of the characters (esp MC) and lack of either world building or rather sloppy character dev….. I’ll comeback to this when I’m more brain dead and out of options to read. Random people are talking and raising voices in a duke’s meeting….. They are taking mc to a forest to do what? Verify skills?….This sloppy writing is just too overbearing. Mc despite mentioning how much he cared for his mother, we see no more chapters of emotional interaction with the mother, and yet he’s developing some for his Father ( who went for milk and never came back) The only emotion showcased in this book is overreacting, jealousy and smug faces……I pause and quit, until I forget I ever made this comment…
bru i ahte when these stories make them kids and waist like 80 chaptersa until they actually become adults its stupid and waists time
Wtf?
He says he prepared food for all of them, yet a few pages ago he scolds his own knight telling him why didnt he tell him that they were comming, cuz it was so sudden.
Why are the always clenching their firsts like they need poo
[The End]
you know even with all those windows the lighting in that room is still sh*t




































Are you screwed? You need a drill? But too bad, this is not a drill !!