Secret Buddy - Chapter 13
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Le Troll d'Aquitaine
1 year ago
i’m having quite the trouble following who’s who.
all of them are quite similar ( their face at least if you forget hair color and clothes) there is a lot of people appearing, the ones they’re following, the agents and the guys when following Mc pov.
maybe it’s just me but it’s hard to follow the rope of the plot with so many details so quickly in the story.
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Light of Hope
Thalorwyn
1 year ago
Man, it’s a bit boring. Where’s the deaths?
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The storytelling is so shit.