Swallowed Star - Chapter 8
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Boop
1 year ago
What kind of inspector gadget is this? He asks him one questions and leaves, saying he can’t crack him.
That’s some brilliant police work right there.
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Kok Mongler
1 year ago
“Did you do it?”
“Yes”
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“Damn, I can’t crack him..”
That was the shortest and most incompetent interrogation I’ve ever seen.. I know it’s extra effort, but if you want to make the MC seem smart or cool, you need to make the characters interacting with him at least a little bit believable.. It doesn’t feel that genuine when chatGPT would do a better job pretending to be human…
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ArcticSpetsnaz
3 years ago
This is pretty garbage but Im bored so why not
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The police are dumb and the prisons are a free-for-all; if I didn’t know better, I’d swear this was set in America. 😜