The Beginning After the End - Chapter 123
Comments for chapter "Chapter 123"
Poor gramps 
so plot armor and an old man who can see the future and knows just the item to give him when he needs it
Poor Gramps
poor gramps is been humiliated
Nahhh if I was gramps, Arthur would’ve had to run my 1s if my GRANDDAUGHTER gave him a hug first 😭
if only the royal family s aloud to here it wy is he telling im
I dont care if im going on a rant someone has to say it; Tessa’s growth hasn’t been sufficiently depicted to justify her new abilities. Unlike the protagonist, whose journey has been well-documented through challenges and growth, Tessa’s ascent seems abrupt and unearned. Her power-up creates an imbalance in the story, overshadowing the protagonist’s hard-earned achievements and disrupting the established dynamics.: The power-up breaks the established rules and logic of the story’s universe, making it jarring for readers and disrupting the suspension of disbelief.Tessa’s sudden boost diminishes the emotional impact of the protagonist’s struggles and achievements, devaluing their journey.his power-up accelerates the storyline unnaturally, creating plot holes and weakening the overall narrative structure.Fans expect consistency and fairness in character progression. Unjust power-ups like this can alienate loyal readers and erode their trust. Tessa’s new power alters her relationships with other characters, creating unnecessary tension and undermining the emotional depth of interactions.
In conclusion, Tessa’s power-up raises concerns about character development, narrative balance, world-building, and reader engagement. While surprises are essential, they must respect the integrity of the story and the investment of loyal readers.
Excuse me if i’m wrong, but isn’t Tess the first one to put a genuine smile on Arthur’s face since the incident?
Poor gramps; Tess went to hug Art instead!
poor virion
Men 
i feel bad for grandpa elf
Next waifu foreshadowing <<< a god
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This old man gives the feeling he should be dubbed by Jiraya’s seyuu