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Elek Lovatka
9 months ago
Dear Author,
Why the fick would you make your MC be terrified of the thought, that his fiance is breaking up with him (annulling the engagement)? Makes no sense and he just met her for the first time.
Doesn’t matter why she wants to cancel it, fact remains that it makes no good damn sense to keep the status quo. Or will you be like “yeah, I’m the MC and I already knew about her secret! I decided to help her before we even meet IRL, but for that I need to remain her fiance! Oink!” ? Normally you’d inform the reader about that in a “thought bubble” BEFORE he starts behaving like an idiot.
Sincerely,
Everyone with a brain
PS: I also want to know that workout/diet, which he used, please.
Deus
1 year ago
Why do the narration bubbles have to look like this. Just stick with boxes like most manga.
Rimuru
1 year ago
I figured he’d be fine with the breakup given he’s not really invested.
Now! What could that secret be?
In love with, or to be betrothed to his more popular brother?
Dear Author,
Why the fick would you make your MC be terrified of the thought, that his fiance is breaking up with him (annulling the engagement)? Makes no sense and he just met her for the first time.
Doesn’t matter why she wants to cancel it, fact remains that it makes no good damn sense to keep the status quo. Or will you be like “yeah, I’m the MC and I already knew about her secret! I decided to help her before we even meet IRL, but for that I need to remain her fiance! Oink!” ? Normally you’d inform the reader about that in a “thought bubble” BEFORE he starts behaving like an idiot.
Sincerely,
Everyone with a brain
PS: I also want to know that workout/diet, which he used, please.
Why do the narration bubbles have to look like this. Just stick with boxes like most manga.
I figured he’d be fine with the breakup given he’s not really invested.
Now! What could that secret be?
Given the story I’m going with #1
He lost a lot of weight in two weeks
mc before he regressed reincarnated (idk the og):