The Diary Of A Sage Around 40 Living In Another World - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
Goddess: hey i had to make a quick decision to save you cause this super evil thing already killed all your friends
MC: AAAGH STUPID GODDESS, HOW DARE SHE TOY WITH PEOPLES LIVES >:(
Is that a mistranslation? The goddess clearly said that they killed by the evil spirit. He is just given a second life after getting victimized by some spirit. And MC is angry like he got caught up in some hero summoning. Would he rather be just dead? Was he expecting to go some Japanese afterlife? Is that why he is angry?
Oh, boy!
The grammar is so bad. Even I can see that. And I’m dyslexic and I’m not even a native English speaker. It’s my 2nd language. And I failed that course. Does an E mark exists? If yes, that’s was mine for English, if not I had an F.
Now be embarrassed to be corrected by the guy that got that bad of a mark.
“A dozen of people […]”
It’s either “Dozens of people” or “A dozen people”!
And of course the government won’t care about that few. Especially when the cause of death is known (suicide). It’s barely a blip in the statistics. Do you know how many people die a day in a city? Let alone a country!
But do you know what really kills a lot of people? Prolonged power outage, that is what kills people!
Page 9: Why TF isn’t the sheet translated?
So, why is he scared of a few goblins? Or hesitant to kill them? He shouldn’t be. To him it would be business as usual! He took many more and way stronger enemies down.
Page 15:
“They eat everything they can found.”
“[…] that can be found” or “[…] they can find”
Page 19:
“damaged“ FFS!
I have less in this wall! And my screen keyboard keeps freaking out, and eats letters. (Not registering all presses. But it is only on FF on mangaread)
The PG goes VRRR. ;p
Why is he just a shitty mc altogether is my question 😅.
Shitty MC, script, etc,…dropped
ok for the record dozens of people dieing vs millions without power. if they use electric heating in winter it could literally kill thousands, not to mention infrastructure damage. i mean yes the government should look into those deaths but why would a dozen deaths matter when thousands of lives are at stake, and its not just winter life support surgeries that are happening at that exact moment so many people would die due to power failure(depending on the length thereof)





































“like if the lifes of the civilians worth mothing to them” oh, who would have thought