The Final Boss, the Engineering Leader - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
So, to explain this, MC is like invited to close beta test to new vrmmo game that’s made by an AI but then, his consciousness gets connected to AI and became an npc due to his connection to the system. It prolly gets weirder than from then on.
Lmaoo so he really become a npc
He said he can’t access, yet he can give command… What a bull….
Because apparently in this world… nobody in their hospitals… has ever been in a coma for many years?
And they don’t know how to do something you can do while camping… in the middle of a major city?
(Facecloth with soapy water and pan/bowl of water to was/ wipe down sweat)
Or those special beds which massage and vibrate to prevent bedsores…
High tech VR full dive tech? But no massage chairs?
Mc trying to wake up be like…. Wat?
I have multiple complaints here. First off, i find it cringe when the story starts off introducing the ‘#1 game in the world’ with the ‘top guild’ and the ‘best player in the guild happens to be the MC’.. Comon, show some variation a bit. If its not a story of the ‘best player in the game’, its a story of the ‘worst player in the game’. How bout give us an MC of a casual player who’s not the worst, but not the best? What about a professional who’s ranked 4th or 7th in the game? Always being ‘the best’ or ‘the weakest’ has been over-used. Moving on, the part with attacking the boss. How the HELL did 2 archers BOTH miss a boss that big? Look, i know my aiming skills suck, but even i would be able to hit a target that big. Then there’s the issue with the CC. Why the hell is a party trying to CC a boss? I can understand it if there was a bunch of trash mobs nearby, but i didnt see any. Furthermore, most bosses can’t be CC’d anyway. Next complaint is the friends list. User A? User B? User C? But its ok to name the leader? Comon, at least make up names for the other 3 users, lets stop being lazy here. Its already bad enough that these stories like to name other cities as ‘City A’ or ‘City B’. The rest of my complaints, the other commenters have taken care of.





































Very confusing start. Did not get everything