The Great Venerable Demon Has Returned - Chapter 22
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Astreaus
3 years ago
The first chapter started off strong, but it all went to shit later on. Cliche after cliche after cliche. Mistake after mistake. A middle schooler can find the mistakes in these. There are a dozen other manhuas like these, but I guess the man who wrote these doesn’t learn shit and scribbles his ideas on paper. Bullshit after bullshit.
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[Cultivator Of The Previous Millennium]
3 years ago
So basically they are throwing in every possible fantasy creature they can think of…. what’s next? Elves and goblins???
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its mid