The Iceblade Magician Rules Over The World - Chapter 5
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Crunchy
3 years ago
the story isn’t bad, but its extremely rushed?
we’re on chapter five and already the mc has overcome the bullying, already has his close friend group, one of which overcame their crippling trauma after 2 chapters?, and there’s someone in the school trying to kill him. all of this and we’ve seen him in a classroom maybe twice
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[Celes]
4 years ago
Ah yes Dense MC
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this pacing is way too fast, we’ve seen them talk to each other once and she’s already having her character arc