The Kicked Out S-Rank Appraiser Creates the Strongest Guild - Chapter 13
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2 months ago
Turn mana into wine. Sound like every alcoholic dream in a magical world. Wonder if the mana quality change the wine quality.
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It’s largely grammatically fine, I guess. But the flow of the dialogue feels rough and clumsy, including repetitive and redundant statements.
Sorry for nitpicking, but Mangaeffect hasn’t had the best track record. I”m more surprised tthey still exist.