The Novel’s Extra (Remake) - Chapter 154
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TC559
5 months ago
Around and Around she goes
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R3ader
6 months ago
I am a bit hopeful – this is a VERY long setup, so payoff can’t be half-assed – let’s hope the story manages the great revelation.
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lilbloom
6 months ago
im really getting tired of nayun she is very annoying
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Dragon Clan
Magic
6 months ago
shes actually a genius
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Connor
6 months ago
W deduction skills
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Cosmic clan
Hibye23
6 months ago
“Talk?” *sarcastically* “Where has that ever gotten anybody?”
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Dragon Clan
Nezox
6 months ago
I really, really like where and how this is going
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Yo Dayo
6 months ago
Holy, I underestimated her game, purple haired girl cooked that up QUICK.
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Unholy clan
̸͖̍C̷̭͝o̶͎̽ǹ̶̞s̸͙͝t̴͕̔e̸̖̎l̴͖̀l̷̂͜ả̷̠ṫ̸͇i̸͛͜õ̵̠n̷͙̊ ̸̛̦Ẁ̷̭i̶̠̇ṯ̶́h̶̖͋ ̶̨͝S̷̜̓l̸͔̋ḙ̶̑e̸̕͜p̶̡̔ ̵̹̆D̷̲̊e̴̯͘p̸̖̉r̸̠̀ĭ̴͜v̴̮̌a̵̱͗ẗ̸̻́ḭ̶̔o̵̯̕n̸
6 months ago
If she were to find out, she’d be broken. Emotionally, psychologically and every orher ally!
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Cultivation Clan
Ara`ara Kimochiiiiii
6 months ago
I can’t imagine nayun’s face and dissapointment when she knows
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Unknown.mf
6 months ago
will chae know about it. i mean she probably will
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nickynixon
6 months ago
Smart girl catches on
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Honestly the MC feels more like a reader than an author. He doesn’t understand his characters at all. He tries to do everything himself… couldn’t he tell them he has precognitive vision/can see the future? It would be more believable than telling them they live inside a story he made.