The Player of the Fallen Family - Chapter 5

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Sesshōmaru

24 days ago

This has become so ESTUPIDO that I’m dropping it. Too many inconsistencies in this;

A badly writing story, in every aspect.
The MC is hiding his capabilities from the two people who can help him to grow stronger in both magic and swordsmanship, and those two people sacrificed themselves in order to save him yet in his mindset is better to deceive them, but “I trust them the most”.
MC has to pretend to be useless to not draw attention of the Phaton family, but does the opposite in there first encounter by ridiculing and provoking Sun Phaton.
If MC can level up by using the player system which gives him experience points and level by slaying monsters, why not get your most “trusted” retainers that he clearly said that he “trusted, the most” to get a bunch of monster so he can kill them in secret.
Final issue, he has to hasten the downfall/destruction of his household in order to save it.

This work has to many inconsistencies and it’s simple BASURA.