The Return of the S-rank Holy Weapon User From the Duke’s Family - Chapter 4
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Demonflame
1 year ago
I swear if the Fenrir didn’t have red eye it would be MCs pet by now, also slow bullets lmao
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PearJamsCousin
1 year ago
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PAIN
1 year ago
What’s with this? Terrible way to continue a story.
Why not say i should get strong so i came to hunt some monster. But where are they?
Why not add things like – i should go back now. I wonder what my sister is doing?
And proceed like that.?
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StagnantAxolotl
2 years ago
Author doesn’t know how to make the story flow, or how to show and not tell, or even how to make believable situations where MC doesn’t feel brain dead
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Straight up shot at her stepsis.
Get child protective service this household is a menace