The Shepherd Wizard - Chapter 13
Comments for chapter "Chapter 13"
I love the magic system
When a girl appears, she starts having vaginal discharge; that is why I stay away from reading storylines involving girls—they just keep having vaginal discharge.
aight imma drop this here, it’s not bad but it’s entirely too predictable. the cool magic system and anything of note are gonna be overshadowed by the perfect John Stu MC that will be able to do anything. he’s gonna just suddenly be a swordmaster soon too, I can tell. nothing feels like it’s gonna really threaten him, and if it does, it won’t really be a setback- I can’t get invested in a story or character like that.
Wednesday needs some hydration.
rat happily ran up with complete trust, gets mummified…
His father was a strong knight right?
We’re only 13 chapters in, don’t forget his dad was a knight after all
This magic system is really cool. Merging science and magic which determines success rate and mana consumption… Causality etc… Eh me brain tired. Need more chapters to relax.
i want more.!
Meisa can probably feel the emotions within things, or pick up on them in the room, maybe even remember them, which is going to be a curse with negative emotions. If trained, it could be really useful, and now Turan is being locked up for questioning or just some time, with a bonus of physical training on top.
What would be more important would be enhancing the body to improve speed, reaction time, and possibly toughness. A slow mage is a dead mage
to defeat monsters, sword is not a good weapon. for humans, maybe




































Goth girls need to train their body too