The Strongest Female Masters, Who Are Trying to Raise Me Up, Are in Shambles Over Their Training Policy - Chapter 10
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Trolls
1 year ago
?? ok your brother died, but what has that had to do with the story at all?
Cosmic clan
1 year ago
you made her character so bad that its hard to look past her actions due to her past. She made such a huge fuss because of rep but she tried to regain it like a coward. too many plotholes
1 year ago
I am aware that it is common to practice for the bad guy of a story to have a past that explains why they are acting in a certain way, but if you are going to include one, avoid making the antagonist someone who is so unlikeable that no one could ever sympathize with them.
Light of Hope
1 year ago
Really dude, you should have at least waited till she got knocked unconscious
1 year ago
Oh… it’s one of *those* series… That’s disappointing.
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Let her die