The Strongest Female Masters, Who Are Trying to Raise Me Up, Are in Shambles Over Their Training Policy - Chapter 10
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Zinmar
9 months ago
The story is, okay, but the artwork is really well done.
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Burkinafasu
1 year ago
Let her die
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Nullixity
2 years ago
?? ok your brother died, but what has that had to do with the story at all?
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Eyes that enslave Demon Gods
2 years ago
you made her character so bad that its hard to look past her actions due to her past. She made such a huge fuss because of rep but she tried to regain it like a coward. too many plotholes
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pika
2 years ago
I am aware that it is common to practice for the bad guy of a story to have a past that explains why they are acting in a certain way, but if you are going to include one, avoid making the antagonist someone who is so unlikeable that no one could ever sympathize with them.
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SilverKing
2 years ago
Really dude, you should have at least waited till she got knocked unconscious
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BrotatoChip47
2 years ago
Oh… it’s one of *those* series… That’s disappointing.
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So her bullying was actually her way of trying to save his life by making him give up being an adventurer…
Sigh…