The Unaware Sword Saint Who Trained for 100 Million Years: Overwhelming Another World with the All-Purpose Divine Artifact Mocked as a Mere Stick and the “Sword Demon” Persona Born from Extreme Training - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
Oh my. Another trаsh whоre goddess? I’m all down to see this сunt death 
This took the intro from like 3 or 4 different series and just smashed them together…
The concept for this could have been done a lot smoother, because I like the idea of the tunnel visioning character losing track of time, but he kept track of time which ruins that completely.
Like, staying up all night playing games and then the light starts shining through the window and hits your eyes and you realize, “OOO…oh no…I f*cked up!!!” But having the awareness that it was so much time..=/ not as good.
That said, this is the first chapter I’ve read of it, and I’m gonna give all 5 currently out a chance. But I think it’d have been better if it was simply, “Wait…I was focusing and practicing and…WAIT WTF HOW MUCH TIME PASSED?!?!”
It should be the opposite tho? If your concentration is so focused the time itself as if get slowed down. Your personal space get fastened xxx times but the time flow outside is like a moment. In the moment I don’t think there’s a concept of slow or fast anymore to the subjective reality of the person.
thats not ulquiorra this one
Its like they put the +99 stick manwha and the manga Failure Frame: I Became the Strongest and Annihilated Everything with Low-Level Spells. (But is has Potential)
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