The Villainous General in a Musou Game: Breaking the Death Flags - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
this is the second time i found a female character who’s main visual quirk is a piece of cloth with an eye drawn on it covering her eye(s), and changes according to her expression
hey nice start, lets gooo
Q: Smash or pass?
MC:
topless in apron….
hmm
normally in these type of story person is reincarnated into magic school bully of early game who pick on hero and get defeat at end of game. but this one take a different path of being general which i dont think has happen before to my knowledge so is intrest change and im intrest to see more
Very solid, polish is evident
looks promising, i see some potential 
I’m here for the adorable Selena already.
Her eyepatch is a cute and creative touch.
lots of villain stories lately and i dont mind that 
its kinda painful how badly ingrained his corporate slave identity is
i understand defaulting to slave brain naturally, but stuff like getting worried about making physical contact with a woman because of corporate rules that dont exist makes me feel uncomfortable in a weird way. same feeling i get when i read someone start talking to a voice only they can hear in the middle of a crowd.
Note: im not saying any of that is bad writing, nor does it stop me from reading, but it just makes me feel weirdly uneasy.
maybe i subconsciously imagine how i would look in their place or something? :/