Ygret - Chapter 43
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Irritating Squad
pi23
4 years ago
a dialog, a reflexion and then the spirits who says “we love you ygret”, it’s a little repetitive at this point, even if it’s well written, if it’s always the same it become boring
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I feel like this story would be more enjoyable if instead of possessing Judas’s body Ygret became like a spirit or separate conscious that could mentor/teach Judas. Ygret just fixing his life and hoping Judas likes it if he ever returns seems pretty pointless since he’ll likely be same if he ever returns.