Well, after reading the second chapter, the chapter length isn’t bad. It’s not long enough where you wish it would end already but it’s not short enough where you think “Damn, I’m already on chapter ## within just 10 minutes this is short.” I do like the characters so far and the whole sharks? or whatever creature it is under the water going to the prison is interesting as well. Imo I think she’ll get away before arriving to this prison or get there and somehow manage to escape back onto a ship or something. I’m not sure but I don’t think she’ll be in there long if she ends up actually being put inside the prison.
Well, after reading the second chapter, the chapter length isn’t bad. It’s not long enough where you wish it would end already but it’s not short enough where you think “Damn, I’m already on chapter ## within just 10 minutes this is short.” I do like the characters so far and the whole sharks? or whatever creature it is under the water going to the prison is interesting as well. Imo I think she’ll get away before arriving to this prison or get there and somehow manage to escape back onto a ship or something. I’m not sure but I don’t think she’ll be in there long if she ends up actually being put inside the prison.