30 Years Have Passed Since the Prologue - Chapter 10

I thought the reviews would be something trolling, like actually demotivational and such. I mean, constant unwanted critism from the readers are never fun to receive. Especially in the negative lights, it can be disheartening. But his review, while simple in basic criticism of theme, character development, grammar, vocabulary, and visualizing language, wasn’t like… some stories I read where the reviews they harass this all powerful author with by just trashing their story because it didn’t go exactly how they wanted.

It was generic because the story itself says it was done multiple times and the author likely didn’t really care to make a story up that he was reviewing and writing a specific review as to not distract the reader from being curious about what that story was like. Or assuming that was sort of what this story was based on, or whatever it was.

But it was a lot more coherently written than I assumed this lunatic would write as a review with such a hyper focus on Isakai stuff. It’s not like Player which was just trolling middle school shit, but actual criticisms of the writing style and lack of ability to give characters their specific voice even as the POV character.