Assistant Teacher In a Magical Girls School - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
Imma just say this…the art is fire. It’s great. 10/10. BUT! Since this is a manga, it’s now a 6/10. Yes, purely because it’s a manga. If you know, you know.
this manga made my stomach hurt.
I kinda want to write a story where the MC is a bard, and can use the elements Earth, Wind, and Fire.
… for obvious reasons.
Him teach students like his grandfather taught him? I have a bad feeling
Just a disclaimer, these are just my first impressions. My actual review later on will likely be different depending on how this goes.
Ok where to start. Firstly, It begins out of nowhere. The intro just kinda rushes into it which I can sort of forgive since this is the first chapter and all. Finding properly paced first chapters is a rare feat these days.
The characters seem at least interesting enough so far but the only one I find the least interesting is Fran, but I think that’s mostly because we barely know her so far so I’m willing to give that a pass for now. I will give them credit though for including PTSD for her. It makes her character feel a bit more real and honestly makes sense considering the incident. Though I feel like she freaked out a bit to easily, that might just be my opinion though.
Action is fairly decent if not short. It does have the “OP MC” trope which can kill the mood of action scenes in series but we’ve yet to see how they handle it overall so I’m holding off my criticism for now.
Plot so far seems intriguing for now thought I’m fairly certain I’ve seen this kinda of direction before.
Translation could be better but not by much. Its mostly just the proofreader that needs to do their job a bit better.
It has the potential to be bad but also the potential to be good. I guess we’ll wait and see.
The mom dressed in a late 20th century business suit and hairdo when everyone else is wearing 17th century palace garb really broke immersion for me.