Children of the Rune - Chapter 23
Comments for chapter "Chapter 23"
Why did he put the armor on his dead brother and bury him with it?? He knows that the sword and armor are more powerful together? It is a Major plot hole in my opinion.
‘Like in action movies where the protagonist kills the bad guys but does not pick up their guns. equipment, and ammo! Does Anyone else have a problem when that happens?
this chapter is extremely sad and depressing. And the fact that he dug his own grave is even more saddening
but he should have kept the armour atleast, the swords effects wont work without it, how will he protect himself and survive which is his brothers wish if he cant defend himself.
i love this story
His brother is the best big brother.
Damn. He even dug his own grave.
Got me right in the feels.
I hope his revenge is so brutal, so utterly complete, that his world speaks of it in hushed whispers for centuries to come.
I can’t wait for the rest of the story



































Welcome to chapter 1.