Eternal Youth - Chapter 1
Comments for chapter "Chapter 1"
I had read Bible with older English than this. So I’m this is pretty chill.
Dammit this sure is not easy to read for those who aren’t familiar with ancient English
Not sure if I’ll like this. I’ve seen and read several stories like that, and they’re always heart wrenching. Not my cup of tea. Let’s see if this is more enjoyable.
ahh if only the English language remained so to this day, we wouldn’t have the Gen Z low IQ slang, this Language is a Beauty.
are speaking in some premium English that i am unaware of
Just the introduction alone hold unfathomable amount of Aura gawddamnnn
Well it wanst so long the last priest was supposedly lost which translates to sacrificied or killed in my book so why not flaunt the obtained power?
Goodness he is hot. Good.
Hmm I’m going to say either a eldritch vampire or a god




































This is a very comfortable reading experience for me, but I feel like someone used AI to translate this into language appropriate for the setting.